Question:
I , the undersigned , am at present a attending doctor in the
department of coloproctology at the Third Clinical College of HeBei
Medical University, HeBei, China . I have worked here since I
graduated from ZhangJiaKou Medical College in 1993 . I have long been
desirous of going abroad for further study in the clinical and
preclinical research of coloproctology. now I am authorized and
supported financially by Provincial Health Bureau to study abroad.. I
think this is a good chance for me to swim in the ocean of knowledge
and perfect myself.
However , I have little information about studying abroad, I have
no idea which lab or which university I should apply to go .
Though I can get the financial support of a certain sum by
Provincial Health Bureau, I do not think it is enough to pay the
living expenses for me to live abroad for a year , I wonder if there
are other ways to get some income or financial support when I am
abroad . I hope you will kindly do what you can for me and give me a
reply at your earliest convenience.
Answer:
I trust you received my last email.
I am a native English speaker and science writing editor. The citizens
of China have brough the western English-speaking world a great deal of
cultural and culinary delights. To make a small repayment, I have
edited your letter for correct English. I hope that it will bring you
some benefit, and I hope you will use it to print out and send to
specific laboratories or Primary Investigators with whom you would like
to work.
You should send this letter directly to scientists with whom you would
like to work. Put the last name of the scientist after "Dear Dr." ...
for example, "Dear Dr. Lawson:", "Dear Dr. Stern:", etc.
The letter is now in perfect American/Canadian/British English of a
professional standard. The edited letter I enclose has a positive
attitude and should be pleasing to scientists abroad. Please read it
and approve its content before sending it to anyone. You may feel free
to write me if you would like to make changes and have the English
grammar checked. I do this as a thanks to your delightful culture, and
those within it who have benefited science so much.
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